Changes made to The Intruders

Revision 4

Created on Saturday, 19th July 2014, 08:59
Change Submitted by Si Wooldridge

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• Change #1 - theory is angle pu
• Change #2 - ry well.  <newline><newline>It's quite satisfying to see all the threads pulled together at the climax, some are not surprises but that doesn't spoil the fun.<newline><newline>What d
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Revision 3

Created on Saturday, 19th July 2014, 08:50
Change Submitted by Si Wooldridge

List of Changes:

• Change #1 - well.<newline><newline>What does take some getting used to is the change in perspective.  All of Jack's narrative is done in the first person, whilst all other narrative is done in the third person.  It didn't really matter to me, but I have seen some reviews where readers struggled with this.<newline><newline>Can’t wa
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Revision 2

Created on Saturday, 19th July 2014, 08:48
Change Submitted by Si Wooldridge

List of Changes:

• Change #1 - ho left on under an
• Change #2 - <newline><newline>

Revision 1

Created on Saturday, 19th July 2014, 08:48
Change Submitted by Si Wooldridge

List of Changes:

• Change #1 - ex-LAPD cop who has
• Change #2 - who has gone to live in the country in the USAleft on under an unexplained cloud.  Turning successful author, he has gone to live in the country wit
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Initial Version

Created on Saturday, 19th July 2014, 08:43
First Submitted by Si Wooldridge